Part one: Junia

This is the prologue, so read this first!!!

Junia

   You did end up picking this off the shelf? Good.

   But I'm guessing you looked at the back and thought, "Aw, angels, how cute." and maybe even smiled sweetly. Well then I've got some news to tell you, my friends and I aren't going to be playing harps or lounging on clouds.

   We're warriors.

   Do you know what that means? It means we eradicate the evil in this world so it doesn't hurt, possess, or do any variety of nasty things to all of you. We're protectors, and we're your protectors. And we're the best chance you have.

   Gabriel, one of the supreme angels of Heaven, made up of a group of four of his best warriors. There is Kalilee, who you could call group leader. Rycel, Harler, and, of course Junia (me). We may look like ordinary girls in our late teens, but I'm sorry to say, we're anything but ordinary. Because if you see us on Earth, it means that something is hunting all of you and we can't allow that.  

   We are not gentle, we are not forgiving, and we do not come in peace.

   We are Gabriel's warriors.   

Author's Note

please review this and tell me what you thought of this. Any comments, questions, concerns? tell me.

Reviews

[Acropolix]

Awesome start, really like the direct tone towards the reader in this. Nice work!

[Horizon K.]

Sounds fun! I'm imagining these warrior girls are only visible by those they need to protect? Cool:)

[The dark story]

wow.now that sounds something "Stand in the line.you're going to witness the outstanding supernatural show here".it really engenders a great interest in me towards your work...i wanna read more..

[RachelReaper]

thank you for that, I needed to hear it

[Melly moo]

Perfect prologue it's intriguing and sets a nice atmosphere for the rest of the book

[RachelReaper]

thank you for reading :)

[Melly moo]

No worries :)

[j]

I Really Adore The Style And Tone Of This Writing.The Way The Main Character(I would assume)Speaks To The Reader And Introduces The "Centra" "Cast" Is So Different,Unique,And Creative.

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

I love how you opened this, with the angel talking about the back of the book and the "Aw, angels, how cute." I'm looking forward to reading more :)

[RachelReaper]

thank you, nI've got the four other chapters posted so far.

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

I'll get to them when I have more time, but I am looking forward to reading what you've written so far. You have a great start :)

[RachelReaper]

:) thank you

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Your welcome :)

[Vincent]

im liking the way this sounds lol. reading the rest! and i might want some help with writing the second chapter of my story, if you'd like.

[The Invisible Girl]

This is really good! Reading the next chapter! ^-^

[Emilie Louise]

Wow I love this intro it's really catchy, I especially like how she is talking to the readers and I really like the last two lines the most.

[MOON]

Interesting wrIte flows and descriptive.