Part one: Junia

This is the prologue, so read this first!!!

Junia

   You did end up picking this off the shelf? Good.

   But I'm guessing you looked at the back and thought, "Aw, angels, how cute." and maybe even smiled sweetly. Well then I've got some news to tell you, my friends and I aren't going to be playing harps or lounging on clouds.

   We're warriors.

   Do you know what that means? It means we eradicate the evil in this world so it doesn't hurt, possess, or do any variety of nasty things to all of you. We're protectors, and we're your protectors. And we're the best chance you have.

   Gabriel, one of the supreme angels of Heaven, made up of a group of four of his best warriors. There is Kalilee, who you could call group leader. Rycel, Harler, and, of course Junia (me). We may look like ordinary girls in our late teens, but I'm sorry to say, we're anything but ordinary. Because if you see us on Earth, it means that something is hunting all of you and we can't allow that.  

   We are not gentle, we are not forgiving, and we do not come in peace.

   We are Gabriel's warriors.   

Author's Note

please review this and tell me what you thought of this. Any comments, questions, concerns? tell me.

Reviews

[Silent Wolf]

This is an amazing way to begin this book! Nw I must read more!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

"Vibrant lines and creative" Keep writing!

[RachelReaper]

thanks

[Death]

This is really good. :D

[RachelReaper]

thanks lol.

[Bella Luna]

This was such a great opening! I absolutely love the last two lines! I'll be reading on!

[RachelReaper]

thanks

[David the writer]

Your grammer is wrong when you said "I aren't", that's wrong. It should be "I'm not". Aside from that, this was a great opening!

[K.G]

i love with what your going for here. . but the way you written i cant tell if i like it the way it is or if it sounds too. . .concrete and firm/blocky/choppy. . .practice the flow maybe? BUT you deffintly caught my interest so i shall continue to read :3 sounds quite interesting. Did you do research for the angles?

[RachelReaper]

nope, no research, purely form imagination. And the flow is just kind of Junia's personality. Its different in the next chapter

[K.G]

okay, that makes sence. . .you should do some research on the angels so you can get a grasp of what they do, and look up other media that has angles in it too like supernatural

[RachelReaper]

ugh... these four angels in particular? Junia, Rycel, harler, and Kalilee? I made them up, there is no angel guide on the,, and i don't really want them to be like other angels. There warriors, not peaceful deliverers.

[K.G]

i know. .i was talking bout the main angel XD and if you wanted other "main" angels to come out

[RachelReaper]

oh... i see.

[K.G]

yeah. . .just an idea/sugestion u dont have to though. ..i was just thinking of those who are like angel nerds and would be like nooooo Gabriel isnt that kind of angel. . .or something like that

[RachelReaper]

i know, its just for the purpose of this story that I'm changing everyone around. I really didn't want him to be like Gabriel really is for the purpose of this book

[K.G]

iaght, makes sence ^.^

[Patrick Henry]

I learned more in this exchange then the actual story!! lol K.G from VF? -PiercedBeacon.

[K.G]

yes i am :p lol, and what did u learn?

[Patrick Henry]

How to make suggestions without it sounding insulting, how this chapter involves the other ones written, and what was the easiest way to reach you!! lol I LOVE RachelReaper..... she's an awesome writer and always gets me in a great mood when reading and sharing with her in any capacity. : ) xoxo -Mark

[RachelReaper]

thanx guys, your the best

[K.G]

really? iwasnt makeing insults really . . .i was just talking the way i typed. . .and i like her writeing too :3 . . .T~T i just not been very active lately. . .

[marie]

sounds like she's young and can't wait to see her first battle

[RachelReaper]

you'll see if you keep reading that she's been in this for years.

[marie]

Kk

[Dark Butterfly]

this chick sounds epic

[RachelReaper]

more of the chapters are up, if you have the time to read them

[W.V. Bard]