Crave More Than Ordinary

Crave More Than Ordinary

A Poem by RachelReaper
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just a little something I thought up

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Crave More Than Ordinary

Wouldn't you give a million dollars

To have a taste of real danger?

Aren't you sick of normal

And the same robotic daily routine?

Wouldn't you trade safe for adventure?

The everyday for extraordinary?

Boredom for something a little more hazardous?

Do you need to fight for your right to live?

Do you feel compelled to earn

Every morning you wake up to see?

Don't you want to fly

Or for magic to be real

Or to be a part of something more than yourself?

Don't you want to be able to say

You have friends that have gone to the

Ends of the Earth with you

And you laughed and cried and almost died

On the way there?

Don't you want to be able to say you've

Gone to the depths of Hell

Just to come back stronger than ever?

To crave more than ordinary...

But isn't that just what everyone wants?

© 2012 RachelReaper


Author's Note

RachelReaper
just some inquiring question I thought up and questions I could answer "yes" to every one of them. What about you? Do you crave more than ordinary?

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Actually, to answer your question, as we get older, we face so much danger and "adventure" (loss of a child, terminal sickness, unemployment, betrayal of friends, divorce) that we often crave to be smitten with boredom, if only for a day. Well written poem, and very thoughtful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I could say yes to a fair amount of them too. I like this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


RachelReaper

12 Years Ago

thank you so much!
Great read you have inspired me!

Posted 12 Years Ago


RachelReaper

12 Years Ago

that's what a writer aims to do... thank you, Chance.
i really enjoyed this write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes.
Lol.
Good poem, inspires some thought...

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is awesome! Love it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


RachelReaper

12 Years Ago

thank you for all of your reviews today
I really admire this, I have wrote poetry for five years now
and I have always wanted to write a poem that doesn't rhyme but
still comes across as powerful.
This is an amazing piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


RachelReaper

12 Years Ago

thank you :)
I love this so much!! Yes to all the questions!!


Posted 12 Years Ago


I crave more than ordinary . Sanctuary can be found in the ordinary , but sometimes it is fun to explore the unordinary .

Posted 12 Years Ago


It reminds me of a friend that used to say: "Between safety and freedom, I choose freedom." She doesn't live accordingly. Do you? Do we?

Posted 12 Years Ago


RachelReaper

12 Years Ago

well I would certainly like to think so

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Hey!!!!! My name is Rachel, and my unofficial last name is Reaper. I am 14 years old. Blood and kisses to all who review my work, I appreciate it so much and couldn't express to you how much it means .. more..

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