Three Epic Lines

these are the three beginning lines to my book called, "Gabriel's Warriors".

We are not gentle, we are not forgiving.
And we do not come in peace.
We are Gabriel's Warriors.

Author's Note

i wrote this for a contest that was for poetry (three lines only) and took these lines out of a book I'm writing :)

Reviews

[Brittany DeFranco]

I like it, Keep writing ^_^

[Michael Stevens]

Excellent poem!

[Mazie Tackett]

alright thats good i guess

[Harley (arbiter)]

Strong three lines, sounds like something they would say right before the battle, the calm before the storm. Great job

[RachelReaper]

:D

[MOON]

Oh dear sounds a good start.

[Mary]

Whew! I can hear the voice, quiet, confident and powerful. excellent!

[Owlgirl]

wow! Haunting! Great job! So much is told and so many questions arise in this!

[icerhex]

Short, simple and sweet. I'll surely be reading the book :)

[Pax]

looks like a very long epic saga..great job..

[Hidden Happiness]

cant wait to read the book:-).