You Made Me This Way

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You Made Me This Way

The voices, they talk

Shadows linger where they're not

Your voice fills the air

But you're not even here

 

You make me so crazy

I'm crossing the bridge to insanity

I need to be locked up

In a padded room

So so far away from you

Forever

 

Why do I see you

When no one else can

Why can I hear you

From where I stand

 

I can't believe that

No one else knows

What's wrong with me

But one

And that one won't show

 

You make me so crazy

I'm crossing the bridge to insanity

I need to be locked up in a rubber room

So so far away from you

Forever

Forever

 

Colors swirl

(Colors swirl)-echo

Floors tilt

(Floors tilt)-echo

Chaos builds

(Chaos builds)-echo

Time stands still

(Time stands still)-echo

 

You make me so crazy

I'm crossing the bridge to insanity

I need to be locked up in a padded room

So so far away from you

 

You make me so crazy

I'm crossing the bridge to insanity

I need to be locked up in a padded room

So so far away from you

Forever

Forever, my love, forever

Forever

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Heyyyyy now, this is the first song I've ever written, so be nice please. But... really..... what did you think?

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

You're good... I wasn't good at writing songs myself my verses are so long that it's more like a poem...

[Nautili]

Good for a first song- now you just need the music to accompany it, if you don't already!

[Samantha Lynn]

well, it is definitely better than any song I could ever write so I loved this. haha
It was dark and mysterious in a way but also told a story a little also.
great work! :D

[The dark story]

what i think about it?.well,i think ,it's fabulous...it a very sweet and heart touching song..........you have really done a great job in your first shot.hey.when is it releasing??

[marie]

great start it could use a little refining but for a first piece it is excellent !!!

[Xerclipse]

This would make a really great song. Insanity, darkness, descending, this could make a great piece. I can't make lyrics for life :P

[MOON]

Lyrical write I need to be locked up in a rubber room, lovely.

[Celestial Witch Child]

I like it. Second line- revise "there" to "they're".

[RachelReaper]

Fixed it!

[Celestial Witch Child]

(:

[Pax]

a song for misery, a cry for insanity. sad and dark song of pain. great...

[Clever Forever]

Wow these are some great lyrics!! I've never been able to write a song, so I commend you.

[RachelReaper]

thank you :)