Faith

Faith

A Poem by Li
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Are you willing to trust and jump in life?

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In the haze
In the mist
In the darkness
All I hear is your sound from down there,
Telling me to jump
So I do,
With no other certainty
I jump
I follow you.

© 2021 Li


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I'm glad you took the plunge. Because that's what faith is for. Thanks!

Posted 8 Months Ago


At first I thought this one was some kind of suicide scenario, but then, upon consideration, it comes across as one who is facing some kind of choice which lies outside the comfort zone. Whoever is being addressed must be someone trusted who has made the leap. Now the speaker must decide what to do. The title is very appropriate.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Li

4 Years Ago

Thank you John. Like you said, it is someone trusted as the circumstances are unclear to the person .. read more

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Added on June 6, 2020
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