Remembrance

Remembrance

A Poem by Liderien

The taste of remembrance

Sweet bitterness on the tongue

Thoughts of a time

When we were young

The ages pass heavy

Like a fast rail train

Carrying my dreams

 Far away from me

The failed touch of laughter

The broken wings of love

Fading with each breath

© 2012 Liderien


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touching poem cleverly worked

Posted 12 Years Ago



Such a touching, heart wrending write. I think we know the feelings...such a lonesome dove strain in love...

well done...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A bitter taste indeed. Wonderfully captured

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 27, 2012
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