Paint Away

Paint away; Erase the lines
Of yester year
Draw again the heart
That is her own
 
To cast away the scars
Of my youth
and doubts that haunt
 
Let me know what it is
To love without fear
To spend without haste
To hope without abase
 
Paint of me honor
To divulse the shame
Of my fate

Reviews

[Lucien Maier]

Well done. The words flow nicely and I was pulled through the piece.

[Liderien]

Thank you! :)

[zainul]

Very imaginative.
Well penned.

[Liderien]

Thank you so much!

[zainul]

You are most welcome

[Samuel Dickens]

How wonderful it would be if life was like a painting on which we could wipe away the mistakes and paint new, better details and scenes. I wouldn't lay my brushes down for days.

[Liderien]

yes, for sure!

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written.

[melandra]

hmm very nicely done i like :-)