Free Me

would you raze all my fear

 

and bestow to me your splendor

 

and take me from this dwelling

 

　

would you bare my suffering

 

and declare to me your light

 

and guide me far away

 

　

whereas I am powerless

 

to carry on vacant

　

 

I hunger, I ache

 

I yearn for you

 

 

to free me

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Poetic illustration of inclinations that are parcelled out during times of gusty winds, thunderstorms, heat lightening and heavy rains.

Beautiful thoughts freed from answers...

[Distant horizons]

A beautifully painted image of a maiden awaiting her knight in shining armour.

[BMColey]

very nice. the thought of someone being freed from whatever nightmare their in is such a bliss thought. keep on keepin on

[Rusty]

Likemamworthy knight smashing the tower walls and causing its structure to fail I would. What a compelling request.