Tonight

a poem inspired by the influence of Steel

eventide's breath of nebulous saunter

precedent of twilight's tempest birth

demurred of reverence to the coming moon's reign 

 

Lips slightly parted she breathes moments of ambience

aglow of influences of evening's romance cleanses her soul

wine's bliss of unity saturates her senses

imparts kindles of affection to night's loving embrace 

flamed to keep reproach of searing memories hence.  

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Your last line encapsulates the mood of your poem; once a time did exist where the fiends of the night were kept at bay only with a well-tended campfire. And so it is with eveningtime, the glow of sunset can push the reproach of memories hence.

Truly unique write, in your own special lines...

[Wolfhilde]

a strong and beautiful poem! very unique and breathtaking.

[Lunny]

lovely ^^

This is beautiful! You have a very old-worldly writing style - so very eloquent. Thank you for sharing :)

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful, intoxicating images your words always paint, none more so than here. Just beautiful.

[no sun]

what a strong and yet very beautiful piece. amazing write!

[Priscilla Sayers]

A breath taking piece!