Mr. Right

I have thought of you often

Every day in fact

I have imagined your face

And tasted your breath

Your heart so lovely

 Your hands warm and holding me

You embrace my soul

with your love so tender

Your words fill me with hope

as you encourage me everyday

to be better than I am

You listen to my dreams and my fears

Never condemning me for my feelings

You love me without abase

I am your dream come true

I am the breath that fills your lungs

Our souls are truly one

 

I just wish I knew your name

Reviews

[Chris]

As true now as then... welcome back.

[Antoñyo]

I clicked on this KNOWING it had (or would get) plenty of Views. Always interesting topic for me because the idea varies from one to another, but the ones with the right idea (non-superficial) are the ones that take time to think about, even write about it.
Love this version, Thanks for sharing this.

[A. Amos]

This poem represent not only class of your soul, but same time all the women in the world; who have one simple wish to meet their; Mr. Right!
I congrat you on such a wonderful write!

[Chris]

I have a fair sense of the "ridiculous" - I really do. Being facetious and seemingly "funny" would be a fair defense mech but you spoke aloud the thought so many whisper inside to themselves and that is about as real as a person can get. No laugh track ...just a soft smile and quiet look of understanding.

[Siegfried]

Interesting twist at the end, which oftentimes relationships have as well. Very unique poem.

[Liderien]

Thank you for the nice review

[Antonio Valentino]

ohhhh the ending was fantastic..

i know the feeling..

for me, her name is, dream

but she only visits when I'm asleep


thanks for the wonderful poem
Antonio :)

[Liderien]

Thank You for the nice review

[Dr. Wood ?]

I is rare to find 'that one' But not impossible... Even if he IS only in your head........Sometimes...the best place to be

[Ency Bearis]

I hope you'll find that Mr. Right and Good. Luck. This is a wonderful introspection, a wish and a desire that you narrated well, and uniquely written.

[Liderien]

Thank you so much Ency!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you got me with the end of this...such a lovely tribute to "the one"!

and then in the end...it is the fantasy, not the reality...but hopefully for the speaker..the realy thing is out there for her.

jacob

[Liderien]

jacob,
yes, total fantasy. I find that the fantasy is better than reality and so much better to dream the dream than to be let down as I have so many times in the past.

[Jack...]

Very good and quite funny at the end. It seems we all paint pictures in our minds of the Mr. and Miss Rights...which always end up nameless. I liked this, it made me chuckle a bit.

[Liderien]

Thank you! it is funny isnt it? ahh the picture we paint of that perfect soul who in my opinion we never really find, because humanity gets in the way.