Two Souls

It is not for me to decide what is to come, my love.

What day should shine upon me to know your face.

That in that moment I could touch your lips

trace them with my fingertips

as my eyes speak to yours.

To see the depths of what has been spoken in the dark

against the fears and doubt.

To affirm what my soul has dared to dream a thousand times.

To understand the increase of your words

raised in my center and the heat of your skin

to envelope the rapture of our affections.

While my eyes are still held by yours.

The most delicate and intricate affection

to behold what can only be seen through

the windows, only for me to know

as you cannot hide it, nor can I.

To look away would be a sin...

It is there, too strong, too powerful

too overwhelming, too precious. And I know it would never be

in another such as what will be imparted to me and what

I could give to you. The pulse, the shock of things unspoken

hidden from those who do not know the channel we have

reached.

The glory of it all, above the heavens, shall it ever be known?

Reviews

[SeaBreezes]

Wow this poem was a pretty read! It touches your soul and filled your mind with light:)

[Ency Bearis]

Awesome poem, pleasure to read.

[Dream Weaver]

I enjoyed this very much. I always found when
words are all jumbled up like this it takes away
from the poem, possibly putting this into stanza's
would breathe new life into it...But overall a
beautiful piece of writing...

[Liderien]

Thank you Dream. I am the other way around. I like the chaos of some poems. But everyone has their likes. Thanks for the review. :)

[Dream Weaver]

You're quite welcome, I enjoy good chaos every now and again as well :)

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful thoughts and words and hopes of what is to come. If only that crystal ball worked :-)

[Liderien]

yes love, if only.

[Chris]

This tastes sooooo incomplete... sigh

[Liderien]

please, my friend, elaborate :)

[Chris]

I reached the end and wanted ...more.

I felt there was more left unspoken
that needed being said -
thoughts that seemed to echo just before my eyes
...emotions softly flowing and held in fingers' tips.

[Liderien]

I see what you are saying...;)

[Chris]

You expressed very eloquently... I look forward to hearing more.