Broken

Of a truth I cannot lie
still from the pounding rain
falls from heavy eyes
blue with tormented pain
in the heart of jaded sighs
 to what end of this world
wide eyed and broken

Reviews

[Rusty]

To read you again....

[Liderien]

yes, the same is still yet here.

[Patrick]

blue with tormented pain - that phrase is a thought grabber because it seems like a contradiction and yet works so well :)

[Liderien]

thank you!

[Jason Dyer]

Straightforward. Sounds like an immense loss from which there can be no repair.

[Liderien]

you have no idea

[Pax]

i read the a couple of times to makes sense of the meaning...somehow the poem is really dark like suffering...like there is no light in your tunnel journey...too broken to fixed...
be hopeful my friend.

[Liderien]

Is there hope? Tell me friend, in what hope lies in you that you may inpart to me that one in the same?

[Pax]

believed my friend that there is something out of nothing... no matter how many times life brings us down or I've been down or lost someone, i still believed that there is still something or someone out there that will make me happy again...