we the gods

Let the lightning strike as we poets  blaze trees to connect with scripts,

Suffocate the pen until it bleeds on the script,

The blood of creativity.

 

Some believe in love or lust

But us in light

We don’t preach, we teach

 

We a rare breed,

Extra ordinary beings,

Creation of Mother Nature,

Yes, we are the makers.

 

Twist, turn and toss words

Like brain storm

Then slice ideas with one tool we have

Sharp minds

 

Let the lightning strike once more as we mate the pen and the script

Give birth to a new-born

I call:…… Poetry

Author's Note

this is my second poem still not sure if i am getting better

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

Once again, you've hit your point, Low-Lee! Yes, you're right writers are the Gods figuratively... We rule the world not of violence but of peace and expressions... This is really impressive! Writers are really cool, you know the quote, "Pen is mightier than the sword" it relates to this because a lot of writings help this world a lot... We write to inspire and not to destroy! Really good poem...
About the corrections... there are stanzas that are a bit too long... You can cut it a little... But don't cut it too much...
(: *thumbs up*

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

wow was not sure how to end it thou

[Rhianne Ney]

If you add something inappropriate to the ending of the poem... It might fly from its main body...

[Brandon S. Whitten]

We are a "rare" breed, other than that well done:)

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

i will work on that

[Anonymous Girl]

You are good at this :)

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

thnk you im inspired

[Anonymous Girl]

My pleasure

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

I'd make you sure then, you are getting better :D

Let me comment on the flow and how good it is. You hook the reader on the first line and steadily reel them in. Not like a barbarian but more of a careful fisherman :)

I'd say among your works so far this has to be my favourite

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

you have always been my mentor

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Don't flatter me XD But thanks anyway hehehe...

[Ama May Cooper]

*rare

Can i ask and take this is anyway offensivly because im not asking it to offend im just curious... is english your first langangue?

Very interesting piece, i am flattered by your description of a writer you give us a beautiful image of powers that can be woven merely with a pen.
I like the flow , i like the brutality... its a great read

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

non taken and No english is not my first language. i appriciate this thank you

[Hotaru]

thumbs up! :D

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

you rock

[Hotaru]

hahaaha.. :DD

[Traycee]

If your writing thats all that matters. "Good" comes with experience. But creativity comes from within....keep going.

[Chris]

Each work we create stands on its own. This one has flow, rhythm, and content.

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

this is my second one from shades of a blind man i realised it is exiting to write about what you feel instead of what you think

[Chris]

Now that is a real poet's thoughts coming out. Well said.

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Amazing! This is so powerful and outstanding!
You are a great writer ^_^
100/100

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

you rock

[∠( ᐛ 」∠)＿]

You too ^_^