Fade

Fade

Fiction

Alone

Done

Evasion

Fiction of truth in what we are taught
Alone in our thought
Done with the world and all it's noise
Evasion of even joy

Riddle me this why are children taught to be silent when something's wrong
Why do we suppress our feelings in instinct?
Are we lost amongst the hate and bad of our world ?
Why will no one stand up for better things.

Fade shall be to those of us who see the grey
Fade shall be to the ones who seek knowledge
fade shall be with us soon

Reviews

[wordman]

ams we`re on a fast highway to hell
great write

[Kamari's]

Exactly sear friend

[SquinklaPsyOps]

So many tender expressions... your phrasing and imagery place this poem in the category of skillful art.

This is interesting

"Fiction of truth in what we are taught "

[Kamari's]

Glad you saw my skill in this

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I actually did like the way you wrote the poem a lot, I hadnt read something as that for a while.

[Kamari's]

Thank you :)