The sky

I stare at the sky
Ask in myself why I did what I did.
Clouds sadly don't hold the answers probably
because I already know it.

I am walking around looking at the faces I pass by waving hi
only stopping when someone is in my path
I probably shouldn't of said what I said but
I guess it is a little late for that now guess my
filter is on the frits again

I stare at the sky asking myself why I did what I did.
Clouds sadly don't hold the answers probably
because I already know it.

I know I'm not exactly the nice person you will ever come by
yet on don't even really care what you think of me anyways
one day you will just be a faded memory along with the rest.

I stare at the sky
Ask myself why I did what I did
Clouds don't hold the answers probably
because I already know it.

I should of had a bar of soap put in my mouth
a long time ago but oh well.
The damage has already been done nothing to do but
watch what happens and hope for the best.

I stare at the sky
Ask myself why I did what I did
Clouds sadly don't have the answers probably
because I already know it.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Quite impressive. Your emotions are directly reflecting through the beautiful face of this wonderful write. Keep writing! ;)

[Kamari's]

Glad you liked it

[Rene Salinas]

Great topic. There is a difference in bewteen having done something and then discovering that it cause harm or conflict. It may or may not move you to rectify. Then there are other moments were you are about to do something and you are aware of the possible implications. One could claim that not but somwhere in there between you and the sky and the clouds maybe.....

You knew all along.

Live and learn I guess.

Thankyou

[Kamari's]

I wrote this because some days we wonder why we did things in the past but of course we knew all along

[Avinash]

Very rhythmic and emotive. I guess "Should of" should be replaced by "Should have". You are growing as a person and also as a poet. I can see both and feel that you should surround yourself with only those things which do not want to hurt you. You are not the person people tell; you are the person you feel.

[Kamari's]

That honors me avinash yes latley the inner me is.coming terms with the world

[Avinash]

That is a welcome change :)

[Kamari's]

Yes it is :)