My Mind

Everyone says they can not read anothers mind.

I think it is a saftey reason for humanity 

that we can not .

My mind alone could shatter peoples hearts ad betray he ones I

love , we are trapped in our own minds and have

to deal with memories and thoughts

that we hie from eachother.

The thought of reading anothers mind scares me for 

I already deal with my thoughts, wants,

memories, and how I see things and the thought of reading 

anothers and seeing what they see, is intresting my fear

is what lurks in the shadow of my mind and thiers.

Everyone saysthey can not read anothers mind

I believe it is gods way of protecting us from the shadows of another persons mind

because we do not know wat we may find in those shadows

and that maybe the safest way for all of us to interact and work

with eachother if i can not see what lays in your mind and you can not see whats in mine.

Reviews

[Savannah Bly]

This has some grammar issues throughout. I would recommend proofreading and spell check before publishing your works.
That being said, I liked the poem. It was honest and true. Our minds are dangerous and powerful against ourselves, mixing that with others would be catastrophic. Good job.

[Kamari's]

Thank you :)

[Saddam]

I believe it is gods way of protecting us from the
shadows of another persons mind
because we do not know wat we may find in
those shadows.

There is much for saying in my mind but top of them is only one word, A brilliant piece. Great my beloved friend.

[Kamari's]

Thanks SSaDD I have been practicing my poetry