Confessions of my soul.

A friend of mine told me something and it made me think

My soul you were made just for me.

You are with me everyday and know every move I make

I do not mean to taint you or harm you in any sense.

I am sorry my soul for the sins I ran blindly into you tried to warn me by putting a

bell in my head , yet I did not listen.

When I look in the mirror I think of all the scars that must 

cover you some I couldn't protect either of us from

the other  caused because I wanted to dance with freedom and indulge in my wants.

My soul you are always there inside of me bearing our scars on 

your skin so it will not show on mine .

My soul I am sorry for the damage caused and when I die

I want you to soar and dance in the heavens without our scars 

so I confess I can be wrong and will tally up more scars for you to wear for me.

I confess I am guilty of many things and all I can say is that I am very

sorry for you my soul to wear the scars that are made, I wouldn't be here without you, and I want 

my soul to soar and dance in the heavens.

That starts with the confessions of my soul.

Reviews

[wordman]

a beautiful tribute to the soul you expredded it well

[Kamari's]

Thank you :)

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

"I am sorry my soul for the sins I ran blindly into you tried to warn me by putting a
bell in my head , yet I did not listen." This line hits me deep, unselfconscious mind revealed here,

When I look in the mirror I think of all the scars that must
cover you some I couldn't protect either of us from...MIRROR reflection..ooh my god..tears...

"I want you to soar and dance in the heavens without our scars
so I confess I can be wrong and will tally up more scars for you to wear for me.
I confess I am guilty of many things and all I can say is that I am very
sorry for you my soul to wear the scars that are made, I wouldn't be here without you, and I want
my soul to soar and dance in the heavens.
That starts with the confessions of my soul." confession made interesting, today i shall confess to my soul, no priest, no pastor just the very same soul that tried warning me in many flops i engaged into and ended up hurting this very soul. beautifully written...emotive...the best poem of my readings,

"when all, has happened, i believe that scars are lessons learned so we should fix no blemishes, turn those scars into stars to concuss a new galaxy of paying attention to our souls.

[Kamari's]

Interesting input but I feel it needs no adding but I'm glad to get reviews.

[Kamari's]

Sorry I Miss read for a minute thanks for the review I love the feedback!

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

cool,....: )

[Saddam]

WOW...dear. it is very nice poetry and your idea is brilliant.

my soul to soar and dance in the heavens.
That starts with the confessions of my soul.

[Kamari's]

Thanks so much !

[Avinash]

It is one beautiful commitment you can start building your life on. It is indeed a soul song every heart should sing

[Kamari's]

Thank you I wrote this thinking of what a dear friend of mine said to me