Is there something wrong

In a midst of heartbreak by the man I will always love but does not want to try and leaves me broken again

You contacted me to say you miss me and what we had so I left another for you you hel me tight at night after making love and saying you love me and you want me to be there I was there to support and love you care for you forgive you every step of the way. I only wanted to talk and be there for on another you feel asleep beside me after makin love and drinking coke and vodka saying you love me and you said you wanted me there now you push me away yet again and don't want to try is there something wrong with me I give you all my love and told you I always will do you think I haven't noticed your pick marks again or the way you get quick tempered again you treat me like i am the same girl from two years ago but you are wrong I have come a long way to be where I am and only wanted you to be by my side till the end like Bonnie and clide is there something wrong with me am I suppose to believe the dumb reason you gave me when I know it's something else is there something wrong with me cause I want you near I try so hard to let you back in and then you just give up is there something wrong with me when I cry now at nights wanting you by my side again or to wake up at your side looking out into the sunlight from your window kissing you good morning yet you give up on that and now I'm alone again in my own bed drowned with sadness and hate is there something wrong with me

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"wanting you by my side again or to wake up at your side looking out into the sunlight from your window kissing you good morning yet you give up on that and now I'm alone again in my own bed drowned with sadness and hate is there something wrong with me"

I felt the emotions in this bittersweet poem. Thank you for sharing...:).........

[Kamari's]

I'm glad you saw the bittersweet tone to it and thanks sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[DrD]

An essay exploring he fundamentals of so many relationships. I recognized the natural tendency to personalize the failings of others as being caused by our own deficiencyl. It's never true, of course, but it remains felt. Very well done. It is not a read one dares call enjoyable, but it is heartfelt and worthy of a second read.

[Kamari's]

Thank you I like your intellectual response on this

[Tania]

beautiful......:) I enjoyed reading this

[Kamari's]

thank you writing this has helped me get out of bed today and I am glad you liked it