Chloe

Chloe

A Chapter by Kamari's

Her name was Chloe ; she was 16 the youngest out of the group of five people.

     She was six foot and had long bright blue hair ; yes blue she had dyed it the color for light blue was her favorite color. Chloe was an artist and down to earth; she dreamed of being a famous painter and living in Italy.

   Chloe Alyssa Barkley was the dreamer of the group of five the one who dared to love and danced with risk, Chloe was also the first to die out of the five from breast cancer at age 39; she had never became a famous artist instead she became a art professor at a college in Colorado.

   Chloe gave one thing to her dearest friend out of the group with was the garnet and ruby charm bracelet she wore to her death bed her child Aubrey was so angry her mother gave away the charm bracelet that held held her life's story that Aubrey wanted to keep in memory of her mother Chloe Alyssa Darth. 

   The charm bracelet held Chloe's life story: A Paintbrush - for the artist she was inside ,A Poker chip-for the last night on the town with her group, A Heart -for her husband Anthony, An Apple- for her career as a teacher, and A Toy Horse rocking chair - for her daughter Aubrey. Chloe was the one who loved, taught, and will be remembered as a dreamer by her charm bracelet recording her life.



© 2014 Kamari's


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This is amazing chapter keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more keep sending me more to read i love reading them.

Posted 10 Years Ago


No bad I like the depth of the characters here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kamari's

10 Years Ago

Thank you the rest will surprise you
I enjoyed it alot. It kind of remined me of myself. I have blue hair,I'm an artist. The youngest out of the five and I want to be a famous painter. Very nice. Thank you for telling my story. lol Except the cancer part and having a daughter lmao. but still very nice work. No criticism here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kamari's

10 Years Ago

I promise I did not mean her to be like you no offense I mean your cool but Chloe and other characte.. read more
Tatiana Casali

10 Years Ago

lmao. Im not offended lol
Kamari's

10 Years Ago

Yes the real Chloe has mysteriously showed up if you end up marrying a dude named Jude then it'll be.. read more
Ack! Why do you make me sad?! Chloe sounded so energetic and hopeful and just when I was getting psyched to follow her around CANCER DEATH. Sad. You messed with my emotions. That's not very nice- but congrats on getting your writing to do that :D

Loved the lines "dared to love and danced with risk"
Charm Bracelet is a great way to show (not tell) her life story.
Intrigued about this "group of 5".

Read request me when there is more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kamari's

10 Years Ago

Yes Chloe will be missed but her essence will never end and the whole book will be around the group .. read more
A splendid write. Pen on...:).........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kamari's

10 Years Ago

Thank you fellow writer
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................
This was not how I formatted this ! I will edit please enjoy the story anyway I shall edit it soon

Posted 10 Years Ago



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