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I lay in my bed and think of all the people is see everyday then I think of you did you know in think of you before I dream in a place just for you and me did you know I cry and am terrified of losing you again I know when we lay next to each other you love me and I love you you take my breath away and I will only let you along with some few even near me or to touch me for I fear sometimes when you asleep by my side I will only be glimpse in your mind when even when you are away I cannot get you out of my brain did you know I love you so when I talk to you over the phone my heart leaps and when you hold me close I feel as if I may collapse because it is only you i feel safe when I am with you and will never give up while you are with me

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[Savannah Bly]

A great piece. Thanks for sharing!

[C. Rose]

Thanks for sharing.

Punctuation is important. You don't want to force the reader to work too hard to understand your message.

Very descriptive (showing over telling). Well done.

[Kamari's]

This piece means a lot to me and I am glad for any criticism of my work as I look at yours may I say you are a very good writer your self I always feel connected in the storyline some how