Alone

There are no words

I am not alone physically yet I am alone mentally no one understand can understand my mind and I cannot understand theirs I happy happy and sad mean and nice for those are the characteristics I have been taught to show day and night when inside it is a hurricane of emotion of what is wrong for me what is right and in the middle of the storm is land alone with only my eyes as my window into my sole as I laugh and and walk with dear friend on the outside for do I wish the could see what goes on in my mind

Reviews

[Saddam]

I am not alone physically yet I am alone
mentally no one understand.

It truelly said..... Relatable. For me it is very touchable piece. You know I am also alone in people.Your poetry is like story telling platform. Gajab...

[Kamari's]

Thank you that means a lot coming from a great poet like you

[Saddam]

You are giving me a reason for pride. Still I am a scholar.... Thanks a lot dear... Good day and take care...

[Savannah Bly]

"hurricane of emotion"

Truly relatable and fresh. A great piece. Well done!

[Kamari's]

Wow I'm glad to make connection to people with my writing

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you. It is a really great write!

[Kamari's]

Thank you if you need anything reviewed i would be glad to read it

[Writer *78*]

The concept of knowing what goes on within a writers mind is very tricky because most of us don't let other people in for the reason of showing the inner most parts of our hearts to a person. Only few have the key and are able to open the door. My suggestion is extend this a little more and put more emotion into this. Wonderful write.

[Kamari's]

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it I have others and I thought the emotion was implied

[Writer *78*]

Sometimes it's better to fully extend the emotion conveyed than little pieces just my personal opinion that's why my poems are so long

[Kamari's]

No you are right my next poem shall be fully of extended emotions so people may feel the story

[Writer *78*]

Good :) you'll grow as a writer trust me

[Kamari's]

Well I hope so you are the only person who's read my stuff and given me actual critics you are also welcome to review anything and I will review yours

[Writer *78*]

There's other writers on here besides me that can do that as well