Charcoal on white lace

Charcoal on white lace

A Poem by Liana
"

The difference I have found between social classes, and skin colour in some countries I have traveled to has been a tremendous one, and this poem reflects that...

"

 

The clouds roll in like clockwork

Lids close over dismay.

Diamonds squeezing shut

And leaking juices from the paupers lemons.

 

Dinner party-‘unsuccessful’ was the verdict.

Ruffles and ruffles, engulfing bodice,

upon this plush lounge.

Dainty china smashes.

It must be the end of the world.

 

Black-gloved hands

Hide angry eyes of this ‘absolute disaster.’

That they are sure to soon forget.

 

Maids flurry, weaving in between

A maze of antique wonders.

Not flailing...graceful dancers,

cleaning something

that is already clean,

with hands that are tainted filth.

The ballerinas sigh

Pleasure inside,

as a night breeze fills their lungs.

 

The dancer with the fairest dress,

and the wrinkles wrapped in dollar bills...

she stands from the couch,

so she can cast her diamonds down.

 

She closes the window.

The swirling dancers

They clear the way, she walks away,

to greet another meaningless day.

 

 

 

© 2012 Liana


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Gorgeous! The pace was well kept and the writing deep.

Posted 12 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
...
. very vivid with a stunning end ...
. you're a very gifted poet ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, deeply emotional piece.

loved the imagery in this. Awesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

242 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on April 1, 2012
Last Updated on April 1, 2012

Author

Liana
Liana

Sydney , N.S.W, Australia



About
A rusty window, a jagged old wine bottle, white lilies vibrating with Vivaldi and a pot I dislike filled with flowers I do… this is enough to stir the inspiration inside my waters and it pours .. more..

Writing
Inspiration.  Inspiration.

A Poem by Liana


Yin Yang Yin Yang

A Poem by Liana



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..