Guitar

Guitar

A Poem by Liam Nealey

A fair head sits upon Her smooth, slender neck;
    Tighter ever do I grasp it,
    Intoxicating to the touch.

Eager fingers hold fast the strings of Her heart;
    Beat out gentle melodies,
    Soothe weary notes.

A familiar pain soon replaces my numbness.

With each move I make,
       each stroke I take,
       each string I wake,
She wails, screams, moans, sings.

We become one, She my voice
                         I Her master.
We become one, She speaks my soul
                         Intense pleasure.

© 2010 Liam Nealey


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a pleasant ode.

it's as if speaking of a lover.


Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes i like how you have personified the guitar here..it is so merging that if you didn't mention the title i wouldn't have guessed it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


LOVELY

Posted 14 Years Ago


This reminds me of another writer on this site, TIMagination. This is really beatiful. I love how you've given the guitar a personality and how you blend it with your own.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I own about twenty of them (guitars) so you're speaking a language I understand.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The words of a musician loving the instrument. This is a beautiful poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, very creative! The words, the lines were beautifully chosen and crafted. I liked the image weaved in the first stanza. Just wonderful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


great writing! true to the nature and presence of music...

"She wails, screams, moans, sings."

Posted 14 Years Ago


One of my favorites of yours so far.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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