Rain

Rain

A Poem by Liam Nealey

Cold drops -forgiving, refreshing, cleansing-
       Thunder down to greet their green, growing Mates.
They surround me,
          engross me in their steady march,
          entrance me with such musical notes as no man could ever recreate,
          drench me with their very souls.
So I stand amongst them, alone in the world,
       Great thunderous Light crashes all about me.
And I yell into the grand mist of it All. 
 

© 2010 Liam Nealey


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You give each rain drop a personality, coming down to meet the green life below. So beautiful...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm craving rain.... wonderful :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This one I get. You created a beautiful image of someone standing in a scene that is peaceful enough but sounds chaotic. "Rain" is a good name for it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 16, 2010
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