New Love

I really don't know anymore...I want to be in love, but when it doesn't work out...it really hurts.

The tears have dried…

I’m giving up on him…

His eyes aren’t on me…

I don’t think they ever were.

His words of love are written for a different girl.

The pain is too much…

I just couldn’t deal…

But wait!

What’s this?

My heart thuds at anothers smile.

I think that all hope is not lost.

Just the opposite!

New hope, new love!

A gentle hug, full of care.

He’s now the one that calls me dear.

Love is within our grasp.

It’s simple what we must do.

Let us reach out and grab it!

Let us see where this road will take us.

Walk it with me!

We shall see what happens next.

Author's Note

I thought it was sweet! What do you think?

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh what loveliness,how sweet..I will always say that ,ha ha
Tears dried..I am giving up..Those eyes were not for me,I give up..
those words were never written for me..how I feel the pain
But wait,My heart beats again..smiles again..new hope,new love
And it starts again..Gentle hugs,Lots of care..i know he is mine
he calls me dear,and I know its love,Its love again
so lets see where the road leads..so come walk it with me
So we see what happens next..
Oh but this is life.comes and goes ,as is everything,its just like that
The game of life ,the game of love..
lovely write..

[54321]

ok hun. just to say if this is about vin... he is in love with another girl. you can't get attached that fast for your own health... believe me. i have been down that road. not with vin but with others.... just be careful.

[barricade]

"My heart thuds at anothers smile.
I think that all hope is not lost.
Just the opposite!
New hope, new love!
A gentle hug, full of care.
He's now the one that calls me dear."

wow!!!! this is beautiful!!!! that must be some feeling!!! a new hoe...a new love...!!! great work there dear...!!! wonderful...

keep it up! i really liked it!

regards
barricade...

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

yes i think its sweet to..a wonderful poem
Great Job :)