Pain

A Poem by Lia

Grab me

Stab me

Cut me

Drag me

Punch me

Squish me

Kick me

Rip me

Rape me

Hate me

Scrape me

Forsake me

© 2008 Lia

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eh... bland...

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I love the names of your work. Pain, Pleasure, Hate, Innocence. Simple, base emotions.

Interesting rhyming scheme, too. And then the last line is the only minor break in rhythm. It draws the eye to question why this difference is. The final line is the only non-physical act.
Nice effect.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Well you're just full of all the emotions, good and bad LOL
Ray

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on July 16, 2008
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Lia

London, United Kingdom

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Hey, I'm Lia. I'm a fashion designer and dancer. I love reading and thought I'd try my hand at writing. Don't expect too much from me lol I'm kinda winging it. Reviews are welcome! I look forward to r.. more..

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