Pleasure

 

Lick me

Kiss me

F**k Me

Tease me

 

Stroke me

Poke me

Squeeze me

Please me

 

Reviews

[Kelley]

Short and sweet and taste so yummy....smiles
Great write Lia! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh very direct and mmmm certainly the best way to pleasure.... very nicely done.

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

The color pink added to the femininity (did I spell that right?) and sensual softness I imagined when reading this poem.

[T]

lol Loved it and to the point! :)

[chico]

So nature..and come from the heart..I love it.

[Legion]

Well, I'm all for it. :P I see you still have that kick a*s avatar as well. ;) I like it and this piece. The poem was nice too. LOL

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

I would reverse the last two lines: First Squeeze me, and then Please Me. (Please me is a more logical way to conclude)

Basic comment
Delicously decadent. Short and Sweet. Erotically arousing. A pleasurable treat.

Well done

Daniel Daly

[Bhavya Kaushik]

lolz..!! This is great....
Amazing humor and I found it quite sensual too..lolz..!
But great work indeed..Very raw and straight!

[Dan Bullock]

I kinda like it's straight directness! What I always say with new people writing...is...don't think too much, sit down and just let it come out without any second thought aand (I don't know if you do) there's no rules that say 'rhyme!' Actually...there are no rules at all in my book ;)

[Ray Hamilton]

Well Ok but we don't know each other yet LOL
You have to get used to my sense of humor :)
Ray