Monster

Everyone has gotten picked on. Sometimes it goes to far turning to bullying. This poem speaks out to the ones who have done this crime and tells them what changes inside their victims.

They cry themselves to sleep at night,

Wishing all of it would just stop.

They pray for tomorrow to be different,

But we all know it’s not.

 

You push them and poke them;

Call them hateful names.

To them it’s like Hell.

To you it’s all fun and games.

 

They are falling to pieces.

They’ve given up on everything.

You’ve forced them into the shadows,

Scared of the next thing you’ll bring.

 

They hate you, and now everyone else.

There is no one out there to trust.

Are you satisfied with what you’ve done?

They’re hearts have turned into dust.

 

They wouldn’t have turned into this.

Why did you have to attack?

They have turned into monsters.

There’s no way you can take anything back.

Reviews

[Relic]

You did this really well. It's unfortunate that for some bullying is a chapter in their life they'd like to forget but never will. This is a prime example of what transpires, leaving an indelible mark on the victim. Nice writing.

[Into_The_Cosmos]

thank you!

[Relic]

:)

[MAC]

what a well written poem.

[Into_The_Cosmos]

Thank you!

[Sarahthirk]

I am very impressed. I love the way it's an easy read, yet it has so much depth and is so meaningful. It sends out a really good message, and I can relate to this poem a lot. You got the emotions spot-on. Very nice job. :)

[Into_The_Cosmos]

Thank You!!

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

This is chilling and scary, supported by the fact that you write brilliantly. Love this! :)

[Into_The_Cosmos]

Thanks!

[Deron Alexis]

I've seen it people who are bullied end up hating society and become what the world would call monsters really I appreciate this writing very well captured well done

[Into_The_Cosmos]

Thank you ^_^