Transcendence

In vibrant purple, I saw
a little girl drinking water
out of the corner of my eye.
In a moment, she became
With clarity, 
the girl she would be, 
the woman she was,
And the children she had left behind...

Reviews

[EYES OF MY SOUL]

Different i like the approach

[Eagle Cruagh]

Brilliant !

This was nearly as difficult as undertaking
an explanation of all that took place in
the moment of a sneeze.

Very well done and interesting to say the
least.

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Patrick Henry]

Puzzles, puzzles, with your poems!! : ) I love it!! I'm still trying to figure this one out past just enjoying myself on your page. xoxo -Mark

[Katie]

Thank you! I'm flattered. =D This one isn't quite a puzzle though -- it's supposed to be more of a description of one of those moments where one second feels like an eternity.

[Patrick Henry]

It describes, to me, this void of contemplating the reason I am there in that moment whilst observing everything around me that is natural and enjoyed, and still ....lol.....still, it has this timeless feel to it like waking from a dream and remembering what was dreamed. Not many poems take me all over trying to figure it out. lol I love it...... xoxo -Mark

[Katie]

Exactly! That moment. Eternity in a moment, where you can feel the time pass as if it doesn't exist at all.