Dad.

How does it feel when your venomous lies position on your tongue

Then slither through your lips.

Spraying into the air like toxins

Yet your heart doesn't even have the decency to interject

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Poetic words. Honest and direct. You said everything with level head and proper words to make your points. Liars words become twisted and the truth cannot be found again. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lexyeff]

It is really nice to get recognition from an experienced writer. I never really thought my writing had any business coming out of the dark and stepping into the public eye. However, your appreciation for my pieces really shows me differently. For that I thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very good. We improve with practice and reading. Writers are always learning.

[sakshi arora]

wow .its short but a poetic bomb . the way you have put it is awesome

[A. Amos]

You open your soul in most honest way, thanks for sharing and I'm sure many would relate with you!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Says a lot in a little but I feel you could stretch your emotions even further within this piece

[~]

What an unfortunate poem... I hope it is not true..

[Lexyeff]

Yeah it is unfortunate. There are going to be people who let us down in life and sadly sometimes it's the people who we were supposed to depend on the most.

[~]

Ohhh :( sorry about this ..

[Lexyeff]

Don't be. Your sympathy is really kind though :) thanks