Waves are Like the Cello

Another poem from Creative Writing. This had to mimic a musical instrument; I chose the cello. Hope you enjoy. Jesus loves you <3 :)

Slow, rolling along the beach,

Crashing, taking with it debris

Of pebbles knocking endlessly

Churning and breaking down

And then it settles

With the rest

Of the sand.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism, please. I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing.

Reviews

[Malleteditor]

It's so true isn't it? Waves sounding like music? Beautiful!