The Lying Thief

Never thought we’d end up here

Wish I could make you want to stay

Cause losing you is my greatest fear

I didn’t think It’d hurt this way

I know now what it's like without you

All the nights I spent alone

Endless days I couldn’t get through

Hours waiting by the phone

You told me way too many lies

And i'm not sure what's true or not

We both got lost in our own lives

And can’t undo this hopeless knot

You're eyes deceive, they hide the pain

No way to hide you're secret shame

Although I doubt it'd change a thing

I know deep down you feel the same

But what I feel for you is too strong

I can't give in, can't let you go

But then again I know it's wrong

It's over now and we both know

When you're not here I lose my mind

My heart beats fast and never steady

I’ve tried, but can’t leave you behind

So take my heart it’s yours already

-Alexis Ortega

Author's Note

Definately NEEDS editting!! Suggestions?

Reviews

[Sabbath_Nikole]

I love how you ended this. Last line hits you in the gut. the line "The lonely nights are proof alone" that struck me as a bit odd, just the alone part after the lonely nights. May want to switch it around, My proof alone, the lonely nights or something like that. Idk i'm just throwing ideas out there. I thought it was pretty good.