Follow The Leader

Darling realize this is just a game
Like follow the leader, I follow you the same.
So if you take your life tonight
Know that I also shall give up the fight.

Reviews

[Tamika]

Wow! This is excellent and so emotional!

[Mikayla_Stagg]

This is short but VERY meaningful. With so few words youve said so much. Great job

[Lexi]

Thank you lovely :)

[Lexi]

So very intense in a few lines... it speaks of much devotion towards this leader, (which could be another person, but also an inner-leader within the self)... and also it speaks of love and compassion, and to blow someone strength. You are very smart for your age, enjoyed this.

- Elisa

[Lexi]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

My pleasure Lexi! :) I did.

[Gresenthaul]

Wow. I got Goosebumps when I read the ending. Very daring indeed.

[Lexi]

Thank you :)

[nicola.]

The last two stanzas, as said before, was definitely a shock. I was like, WOAH, not expecting that one. Very nice write, I like the rhythm and the suspenseful buildup throughout.

[Lexi]

Thank you haha :)

[Frieda P]

Oh ouch, wasn't expecting that! Like a smack upside the head!

[Lexi]

Not exactly sure if you meant that in a good way or not but thanks for the review :)

[Frieda P]

Oh it was good, you got my attention! :)

[Lucid Dreamer]

I like the cleverness of the title and emotion. Great read!

[Lexi]

Thank you! :)

[Lucid Dreamer]

You're welcome!

[Lydia Shutter]

Starts out so childlike yet delivers quite a powerfull adult message. So "Romeo and Juliet" romantic. I liked it. Lydi**

[Lexi]

Thank you I really appreciate it! I didn't write it with the intention of romeo and Juliet in mind but I definitely see the connection, so thank you for sharing that with me :)

[Matching Socks]

Sometimes this is a fun game to play, in this case probably not.
Well written though and a clever title.

[Lexi]

Mmm yeah probably not a fun game in this case... but thanks for the review haha, I appreciate it!! :)