The lion and the lamb

i was inspired from all the twilight series to right this sorta the way i woulda felt if i was bella when edward left

 Maybe if i hold my heart in this place i wont feel a thing

ill push myself foward evan though its killing me 

i can here you in the darkness i feel everyword you think

i know i might be crazy but the delusions are so sweet

i know giveing in to me was your greatest defeat 

i thought the lion feel in love with the lamb but now im not sure who i am

 

 

Author's Note

im not sure if i like this =/

Reviews

[Greystone]

Good idea, I'll give you that. Welcome to writer's cafe! :D However--spelling and grammar. I know, the bones of the thing are the least point of your work, but they are important the the eyes of you readers. Mine burn and scream in protest at your lack of punctuation.

So please, help my eyes. Please? My next beef with you--I regret to announce--is the one I share with many new authors/Poets. No matter how well accomplished, they fail to seperate their lines properly. As I've said before, messages you hide in lines do not like to be suffocated. De-suffocate them--message me for help if you need it, okay? I'll be more than happy to help such a talented person.

Keep Writing.

[Adelia Alighieri]

It's cute! Somehow does, reflects Bella's emotions..Haven't read Twilight but this sure was nice!