Why!

Sucks but i was just venting out my feelings

Why!

Why do I miss you!

You hurt me. Thats all. 

Told me lies. Tons!

I love you

Yeah! Right!  

You never did!

Why’d you leave me 

For my best friend

Huh?!

I did care about you!

I really did!

Oh Shut up!

Your damn lies!

If you cared

You wouldn’t

Have made me lose 

My best friend!!

I’m sorry.

There’s just something 

About her I like

You just want to get in her pants! 

That’s all!

She’s easy so you left me!

You don’t know 

But I did love you.

I did care about you

Why did you do this to me!

Why!

Author's Note

What do you think? :/

Reviews

[Machiavelli]

Its not half bad its actually great

[Sav]

You can really feel the emotion popping out of the screen in this. What makes this really good is the fact that a lot of people can relate to the situation and your feelings on it. The situation sucks, but you brought it out in a beautiful way. :)

[Impulse]

It hurts when people leave you. Especially when they cheat. If they left you then they weren't right for you in the first place. You'll make it through. Nice write =]

[Amy]

its good i like the way it keeps asking questions