Did i make a mistake?

I know this sucks.. i haven't written in forever had no inspiration...

I broke up with him

I still love him

I had to do it though

We had troubles

You stopped basing our love on trust

But you based it with lust.

I ignored your seductive ways

Thinking that your old self was still there

Your wants of having sex

Got worse…way worse

It takes you forever 

to understand no

I felt it was best that I ended it

But I still care and love you

And your just making me feel guilty

Did I make a mistake?

Reviews

[Impulse]

I believe you did the right thing. Even though your actions hurt at the time, it's gonna be better in the long run. Good write =]

[Wolfwind Words]

A perfect example of one of life's learning lessons and moments of choice. I think the course of life in the piece was the safe one. With a world so crazy, better do what's right for you, than let another dominate your decisions.

Good poem!
Aaron Wolfie Maycroft

[Lexi]

that was a very good decision. really strong.
very well written, too :3

[A]

I have to say, no, you did the right thing.

Anyway, good poem. xD

[Bella-Marie]

If this was a true story, then good on you for dumping him! People need to learn to accept others opinions.
The poem is really good. I can see it from your Point Of View, but I still reckon it's really well written.