Supposedly Flawless

This is about those girls who think they are perfect and well im criticising them...not my best writing tho

You say you have no flaws

but really all you wear are push up bra's

You need a brain

Thats a shame

 

You wear high heels to make yourself look tall

Im surprised you never fall

All you wear is makeup to hide your face

because your really repulsive

 

You whine when you break a nail

Wow your so frail.

Ya im being mean but i gotta good reason

Your act of treason

 

Your such a s**t

But you really got no butt

Your such a fake

Give me a Break

 

Your vain

Your insane

You need to be slain!

 

Author's Note

Um ya i know it sucks...

Reviews

[Impulse]

Everyone's an average person. Some are just more insecure than others and try to hide theirselves behind their looks. I liked this one a lot. Great write =]

[there is no more from m..]

this a a grate poem i liked this

[Theresa]

I really like this. You strip away everything that makes those girls who they are. Underneath it all they are just an average girl like everyone else. Nicely done.

[DELETED]

I like this only,
Your such a fake

Give me a Brake


that line, should be "break'