Forsaken

In the cold, neglected night

A  strange dark figure roams insight

Frosty, ice,  a spec of light

Surrounds an unholy sight

 

Spinning, whirling

Round and round

Soaring, falling

To the ground

 

An isolated presence here

Moves around, for us to hear

Lost within a whirl wind hole

Forsaken, pain, a lonely soul

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awesome piece... short but catchy with a nice dark undertone.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

Excellent imagery! Great job...you ROCK !

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Dark and forbearing. I can feel the loneliness in this writing. nice.