Darkness and Bones

Writing from the heart, of a very hard time...

So many thoughts

Not a word to say

How will I make it

Through another day

I remember they told me

It will get easier with time

But everything stopped

He was no longer mine

The fire spread quick

His death could not be real

All of life's lessons

I could no longer feel

I dropped to my knees

The tears flowing fast

I could hardly breathe

How long would this last

My heartache was deep

It cut to the core

Such painful feelings

That last evermore

All light had been taken

Tears soothing the moans

All that he left behind

Was darkness and bones

Reviews

[mum]

I love the last part of this, "all the light had been taken tears soothing the moans all that he left behind was darkness and bones.

[Lexi Wilkins]

Thank you.

[Joey Nizz]

you truly showed the affection and what the character was going through in this one, well done.
I like the way your poems are made, they actually make you feel and relate to the character as you go through them.

[Lexi Wilkins]

Thank you!

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome

[Aishwarya Prem]

Emotional..keep writing more :)

[Lexi Wilkins]

Thank you.