Fred

Fred

A Poem by Alexia Gray
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Not really romance but wasn't sure where else to put it; a little bit of fun for a boring Sunday evening!

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Oh, Fred, how you taunt me,

Each Sunday night at eight.

You may not be the tallest,

But your muscles are so great.

Your cheeky chappy smile

That I could never hate,

And the hair styled so perfectly; 

That I would never berate.

Oh how I wish and wish

That like you, I could skate.

But the problem is, I can't,

For I've only been once to date.

But still I go through all the other days,

For the end of the week: I wait,

Because oh, Fred, how you taunt me,

Each Sunday night at eight.

© 2009 Alexia Gray


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nice....i like this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a lovely wee cute, comical well written poem. Well done. I love it....Hope there,s more.
Babsie Bee xx

Posted 15 Years Ago


cute! I love short rhyming poems that aren't hugely deep, nice work! :D

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Posted 15 Years Ago


This is cute, tongue in cheek, and fun. Thanks for the read.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


aww this put a smile on my face. Its a nice bit of light hearted fun. Nice

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Posted 15 Years Ago



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Alexia Gray
Alexia Gray

The Countryside, United Kingdom



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