Would You Look At Her

Would You Look At Her

A Poem by Askew

With a body like that
She was made for men.
Look at those breasts
And those sweet and inviting hips,
Imagine how it would feel 
To have those soft legs wrapped around you.
She was crafted from clay 
To satisfy men,
To see to their needs
And keep them pleased.
With a body like that
Her future is set in stone.
She'll never see her 30's
Because she'll burn away by 25.
Would you care for a taste
Before all the cream is licked up?
She was made for men like you,
So do what you do best
And bring her to her knees.
Treat her like your other girls
And force yourself
Through the walls she hides behind.
I promise her pained screams
Are cries for more in disguise. 
She'll run and hide from you,
Beg you to stop,
But keep in mind
It's all a game of reluctant tag.
After all
With a body like that
She was made for being caught.
Captured.

© 2019 Askew


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THIS is excellent work: and sarcastic realness of toxic patriarchal behavior is well portrayed and versed in this piece. truly excellent work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The poem expressed, one side of life. Sex is good, but we need more. Both women and men are to blame if they forget. A person goes with those breast and the butt. I believe we decide our life, our journey. Powerful words, made the reader think and ponder.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


There is a very great sense of jealousy and anger within the sardonic tone of this piece. Your scathing assessment of man is brutal and you paint this woman as shallow cannon fodder. We have all seen the painted lass with no intelegence and little future who becomes a mere functional play thing. Unfortunately some women are forced into such a model while others choose it as their climbing wall.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lexi - you paint an unabashed picture of a woman that would fill the desires of just about any man. As to the chase, would it not be worth the effort? You have a titillating imagination - very nicely done.

Take care - Dave

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Fox
Wonderfully written, and a very deep meaning. You clearly have a gift for writing

Posted 5 Years Ago



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