That Girl

Do you see that girl?

The pretty blonde

With baby blues?

The lips that work wonders

And the fingers

That don't hesitate to touch?

The chest we've all seen

And the wide open legs,

Her panties a welcome mat?

Do you see that girl?

There in the mirror?

She's pretty...

For a w***e.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ouch! straight shootin' Lexi .... I think the shock value of your poem works well .. i like your surgical use of the language ..and i like how you invite the reader in as a voyeur at first .. and then as the person in the mirror ... we try so hard to find love and fulfillment through sex ... one's self image only gets worse as we are used and used again .... but........at least I'm pretty ;)
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[Jolan H]

Damn that felt painful and I'm a dude, very cool and bold, and most of all it is honest. The words cut through the reader awesome

[Frederick Okonneh]

Well, this was lovely. I loved the ending.

[Jade]

OUCH!! Wow, straight and to the core, nicely done

[Dave]

Such insight for someone as young as you. Surely you must know or have known a girl such as the one you so ably describe. In a very different way though, don't you feel sorry for her?

Take care - Dave