A Girl to F**k

A Girl to F**k

A Poem by Askew

I'm playing three guys
Of all different ages
But I might love one

Varying degrees
Of intimacy with all three
But I might love one

Tell me how to stop
Teach me to properly care
For I might love one

This boy doesn't love me
He can hardly stand me
And I'm aware he's using me

And so I use the others
Because despite my reputation
I have a craving to be loved

But that doesn't happen
I'm not the type
To be loved by men

I'm a pretty face
And open legs
I'm nothing more
Than a girl to f**k

© 2018 Askew


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Intimacy is sought by all, and unfortunately, some resort to promiscuity to find it. You have expressed this so well. Although I usually feel that English has enough words to express what we want to say without having to use, well, colorful language, the context in which you used strong language here I found appropriate. The contrast between the desire for long-lasting intimacy and the reality of apparent no-string-attached sex is portrayed in an in-your-face way - as it should. The narrator of this poem may have, secretly, "until death do us part" wishes for her romantic future, but alas, she is stuck in a culture telling her that instant gratification is okay and doing whatever you feel like will have little lasting consequence. I guess all youthful generations suffer the same relationship myopia.

Brilliant poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Harsh, raw, reality of life, and when a lost souls feel the need to give too much of ourselves towards others, thinking long term it makes her feel better. When really all it does it make her feel far worse long term. Sex as so-called love and affection. Is just getting used for sex alone. Nothing more and nothing less.

Posted 5 Years Ago


"Watch out boy she'll chew you up
(Oh here she comes)
She's a maneater"

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Very sad and bitter. I think problem is mostly people separate sex and real love. Some people are scare to face it with fact there is more then one f**k. Sex can be very spiritual and it's can help person to be more open and creative. End of the poem is very brutal and hopefully it not stay truth for long time. I don't think rhymes are important here. I really like how is it. Rough straight to the point and full of realistic images.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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