This is the sad truth about so many women and men out there today- looking for love the wrong way but it goes back to the past in many cases as they were never shown love- a nrver ending vicious cycle- i pray they learn to value themselves and find the right type of person to show them what real love is- very true write here, well written🌹
This is so raw and kinda straight in the face. I’m glad that you didn’t put an overtly graphic jpeg image cuz despise the fact that I do like a well written erotica or mature write, I normally can’t read or review them cuz of the lil porn pictures they put in the poem. I mean I obviously cannot open that up in the office. I prefer creating the imagery rather than putting up a porn picture in the poem. In this case I totally buy your case and metal situation depicted in the write. It so very real
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
I'm so happy you read, liked, and took the time to review my poem, it means so much to me. I meant f.. read moreI'm so happy you read, liked, and took the time to review my poem, it means so much to me. I meant for this piece to be kind of gritty, and I appreciate that you took notice of that.
5 Years Ago
Pleasure was all mine and I hope this wasn’t a piece of your life, but an imagination. In either c.. read morePleasure was all mine and I hope this wasn’t a piece of your life, but an imagination. In either case with an imagination so good, you are a queen. Do remember that and no one gets to deappreciate that at all. Please keep writing and making world better
I can feel that lostness, worry and feeling less of a person, because of somehow being a girl. The need for love and somehow behind the cheating that happens. Its not because you want to hurt someone, but you are also looking for just satisfaction. Its beautiful!
Great job! I think this poem is representative of the reality women face when wanting to express their sexuality. Every woman has the right to f**k whoever they want, but they often face harsh ridicule when they choose to be open with their sexuality, and I like how you represent this idea within this poem. You demand the reader to take your point, and that's admirable. (: