Vest of Stars

Wouldn't it be nice to start over?
To go to the fields of clover?
Running through it in my mind
Thinking of it all the time
I wish it were that easy
To go where times were breezy

All I can do is persevere
It's not like there is failure to fear
The black clouds are always there
No point in dreading despair 
Every day I display my scars
Like putting on a vest of scars

Life only goes through the motions
Just like crashing waves in the oceans
Go with the ebb and flow
You can only do those things you know
Time and space are infinite
All you can do is deal with it

Author's Note

Wrote this in a few minutes. Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

This isn't that dark, really. But a good splash for only writing in a few minutes. :)
Trudging through life is miserable, do overs would be great, vitamin E oil can help scars fade (= bruises remain till our body heals, but life lessons stay forever. I love how you described hopelessness, then twinged in a bit of hope that things may change. Only a few mins huh?...wow :)

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

This is splendid! =)

[Coyote Poetry]

It would be good to re-start a situation and even life. I believe could cause a lot of wild reaction. I like the logic of your poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote