Life (Can't hold you back)

I thought of this awesome line that I turned into a poem

When you're in the fight

Fight with all your might

Battle for control

This is just your soul

Swing and sway and serenade 

Force your will right through

Ignore the attack

Life can't hold you back

Reviews

[Britny_ Grady]

I really like this poem. I also have to agree with Underwriter. That second stanza is very true. We really do need to push forward, even when things seem stacked against us. Very nice.

[underwriter]

so true! good write!
i perticurlerly like your second stanza 'swing ans sway and serenade, force your will right through, ignore the attack, life can't hold you back' simply amazing, and so true! we really need to take that advice sometimes! good write! well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong and powerful poem. Your words are true. Can't give in and allow the enemy to take control. I like the ending to your outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sounds like the mantra of the 25th marathon mile.
nice work.

[Art Sun]

a thought that when realized.... it is only ourselves who can hold us from anything and everything...nice...