I wish I could help...

I want to kick his a*s

No you can’t

Put his face through glass

I’ll just laugh

 

I wish I could help you

I know

For what he’s put you through

It shows

 

If I were there he would be gone

You wouldn’t suffer anymore

I’d take your somewhere safe and warm

Where he couldn’t come to your door

 

I know you want to help

Your feelings are heartfelt

Right now let me handle this

I want to fix my crisis

 

Maybe someday we will find each other

And have a good time

We have a lot to do together

Things will be divine

Reviews

[Pookie]

Whoa...is all I have to say. Well not really. But that about sums up what I really need to say. I got chills. Here: "If I were there he would be gone
You wouldn’t suffer anymore
I’d take your somewhere safe and warm
Where he couldn’t come to your door" I got chills. It may say this on the outside, but on the inside is a story wanting to be told. It really gave me goose bumps. I agree with *Kantola* Adored it! It's so going on my fav's list! Keep up the good work!!!!

[Emily Paige]

awwww love it

[*Kantola*]

This was absolutely perfect! I LOVED IT! Adored it, It's totally going on my favorite's list :)
"Maybe someday we will find each other
And have a good time
We have a lot to do together
Things will be divine"
That makes me think there's a hidden purpose to the poem, not just getting across the message of protection! [boom chicka]
Great write :)

[ashley]

Awwwwww......... this made me cry. Perfect. :D