What are you worth?

I just want to pull my brainstem out

Watching you with that food in your mouth

You’re wasting your time and your life

All over some pre-conceived strife

 

Are you alright?

Please do not fight

It is not worth the pain

I just want you

To make it through

And no longer strain

 

Stop your damn crying you little b***h

It seems your gender has gone and switched

Your dreams mean nothing in your little world

You achieving something? Don’t be absurd

 

Just lie down and float away

It will stop all of the pain

And leave you at peace

Just give in

And commit that sin

And go to the eternal beach

 

You don’t account to anything you weakling

You don’t even think to care one inkling

You are dead to me and all your friends

You really meant nothing in the end

 

That’s it, just come this way

I can end all of your pain

And things will be just grand

You made the right choice

Now follow my voice

Into the promise land

Author's Note

Just a little conversation in ones head

Reviews

[Vin]

This was awesome :) it described really well the conflicting thoughts that go through our minds. It was very well done, it flowed really well. All in, I thought it was great!

-Beth

[An owl on the moon]

There is a driving force to your words that carries your reader through to the end. Powerfully spoken!

[Keevan]

awesome. great job :)

[Mitch*Dandy]

Wow great write! I like the rhymes and everything!

[Coyote Poetry]

I have these conversation often. Trying to figure right from wrong? Poem is a amazing. The internal mind battle are the worst kick asses we get in a life. I like this poem. Movement and story was outstanding.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Awesome, the complexity of one direction and the another is greatly surreal! I love it! xx

[The Analog Kid]

Very mixed thoughts. Good use of stream of consciousness.

[Wolfe Greytome]

An interesting style and quite well written. Good job.

[ashley]

Very good! :D

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was an excellent and well written poem. Thanks for sharing. :)