What are you worth?

I just want to pull my brainstem out

Watching you with that food in your mouth

You’re wasting your time and your life

All over some pre-conceived strife

 

Are you alright?

Please do not fight

It is not worth the pain

I just want you

To make it through

And no longer strain

 

Stop your damn crying you little b***h

It seems your gender has gone and switched

Your dreams mean nothing in your little world

You achieving something? Don’t be absurd

 

Just lie down and float away

It will stop all of the pain

And leave you at peace

Just give in

And commit that sin

And go to the eternal beach

 

You don’t account to anything you weakling

You don’t even think to care one inkling

You are dead to me and all your friends

You really meant nothing in the end

 

That’s it, just come this way

I can end all of your pain

And things will be just grand

You made the right choice

Now follow my voice

Into the promise land

Author's Note

Just a little conversation in ones head

Reviews

[Ecros Lathes]

ya all of us have a conversation in our heads not quite like that but close. :)

[Daniel Gardner]

Lets just hope that the conversation is in your head and not verble enough the everyone can see you answering yourself. I really like it.

[WriterSki7]

Ah yes, the conflict within. This was a very creative way of talking about the subject. Good job.

[Luna Northstar]

Wow... reading this I don't know what voice would be more terrifying to hear. You did very well in this piece.

[Frantzuu]

nicely done dude :D

[Kristen]

Strong and powerful, the rage really shows through. Nice job!

[The High Poet]

What an interesting conversation it is. Thanks for the read request

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

I loved the way you wrote this one! great job

[victoria]

i love the contrast between the red and the blue letters. its true, usually when people are thinking the thoughts consist of both sides of there problem. you did a great job portraying that. wonderful write :D

[MissWordSmith]

haha! THOUGHTS... damn interesting stuff going on here.
I loved the poem. It shocked me and then I sighed when I realised they were just thoughts... because you know what... everyone is evil sometimes.. in our heads of course.. :P :P